Wednesday 22 November 2017

The Basketball Adventure

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora, Kieran

    My name is Mitchell, you did a great job with your narrative writing. I liked the way that you effectively used description to improve your narrative writing. I liked how you effectively described where the characters were and what they were doing. After reading through your learning objectives I think that you have successfully met your criteria. Good job.

    Yours sincerely,
    Mitchell.

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